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2009年10月27日火曜日

Haiku about Autumn


On October 14, I drove up '鳥海ブルーライン' , 'The Chokai Blue Line', which is a driving route to the half point of Mt. Chokai, 2236 meters high. There I took some pictures and wrote some haiku.


Autumn trees

making themselves up--

Mt. Chokai


秋の木木粧ひ始む鳥海山

aki no kigi yosooi hajimu Chokaisan



Autumn lakes

making room --

migrating birds


秋の湖渡る鳥あり憩ふ間に

aki no umi wataru tori ari ikou ma ni


― Hidenori Hiruta




12 件のコメント:

  1. Oh Beautiful photo, Hiruta San :)

    and the haikus are so different from the usual -- it really reflects the beauty of autumn as perceived....i myself usually associate it with sadness and separation...though the colourful trees are a beauty to behold :)

    and the lake haiku -- we are having birds coming in too and i like the way you present it...so much :)

    best regards,
    devika

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  2. Thank you very much for a nice comment, Devika San!

    In the first haiku I wanted to express the last makeups of the autumn leaves which had to leave their tree for another world.
    And we often hear that candles flare most brilliantly at the last moment.
    I tried to find something beautiful in sadness and separation.

    best wishes.
    Hidenori

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  3. Yes Hiruta San....i haven't seen many saying it so subtly...the beauty lies there :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. Most pleasant, these poems, Hidenori san. Thank you for sharing.

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  5. I would humbly invite you to my blog and help me develop in this genre. Thanks. I have two blogs: one for haiku and the other for other projects. I love your haiku.

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  6. Hiruta san:
    Now I have a new place in my haiku-geography; Mt Chokai!

    I began yesterday with this haiku. Slept not so peaceful night. An now I wonder whether it's ready, but this one is the latest version:

    it's first landing --
    a yellow leaf
    on an autumn lake

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  7. Tikkis san, your tender heart made the yellow leaf land on the autumn lake, I'm sure.
    Thank you very much for your beautiful haiku.
    I've appreciated it so much.

    Your friend
    Hidenori Hiruta

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  8. Nana Fredua-Agyeman san,
    nice to meet you on this blog.
    I'd like to share haiku with each other through our blogs.
    I have another website,whose address is http://akitahaiku.wordpress.com/.
    Thank you again.

    With my best wishes.
    Hidenori Hiruta

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  9. Thank you very much for a nice comment, William Sorlien san.
    I enjoy your blog, 'HAIKU BANDIT SOCIETY'.
    Thank you.

    With my best regards
    Hidenori Hiruta

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  10. This truth of beauty... simplicity becomes complex. _m

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  11. Thank you very much for a nice comment, Magyar san.
    Your words are stunning.
    Thank you again.

    With my best regards
    Hidenori Hiruta

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