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2010年1月19日火曜日

Haiku about Winter (4)


My haiku appeared on the Asahi Haikuist Network by David McMurray on January 1 and 15.



From Heaven's hand

do snowflakes spill

falling stars


神の手のこぼす雪片星降りぬ

kami no te no kobosu seppen hoshi furinu



A cup of tea

keeps us cozy ―

snowy garden


雪の庭一杯のお茶に温もれり

yuki no niwa ippai no ocha ni nukumore ri








8 件のコメント:

  1. Good pair... I like the relationship between the stars and snowflakes. _m

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  2. I like best that your haiku make the reader feel present in your haiku moment. Thank you for sharing these. They are lovely.

    Yousei Hime

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  3. very nice set, Hiruta san :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. The words capture important memories, to be saved and savored. Is that why we write?
    Have a beautiful weekend, Hiruta san.

    Sincerely,
    Dianne

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  5. Yes, the words are supreme to capture, save and savor important memories.
    In addition, my poetry comes from love and thanks.
    Haiku is the best form for me to express love and thanks.
    I took up the same question on the updated webpage 'Haiku about New Year (2010)(Part 3)' of the Akita International Haiku Network on January 23 at http://akitahaiku.wordpress.com/.
    Would you please check it out?
    Have a nice weekend, Dianne san.

    Sincerely yours,
    Hidenori

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  6. Hiruta San,
    __I thank you for adding magyar-haiku to the link list on Akita International Haiku Network, and that address is in my favorites list! _m

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  7. Thanks for sharing your cozy cup of tea !!
    Gabi from Okayama

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