Here in Akita it's already been winter, but in my haiku world it's still autumn.
At the middle of November, I visited the foot of Mt. Moriyoshi （森吉山）, which means 'th forests abundant in trees'.
I wrote the last haiku about autumn in 2010.
The white thread
dropping through
bare branches
白糸や無地の枝縫い落下する
Shiraito ya muji no eda nui rakka suru
Fallen leaves
cover the mountain
another life
散り散りに山地を包む落葉かな
Chirijiri ni sanchi o tsutsumu ochiba kana
― Hidenori Hiruta
Both poems are structured with an emotional undercurrent.
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Chen-ou Liu
always a treat to visit your blog
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gillena
lover the white thread. can imagine a lot. besides the jux is just perfect
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