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2011年11月3日木曜日

Haiku about Autumn (21)


秋色の絵の如き山浮びけり

shushoku no e no gotoki yama ukabi keri



picture-like mountain

floating up

in autumn hues





新米を産みし稲田の憩ひけり

shinmai o umi shi inada no ikoi keri



new rice produced

paddy fields lie

in repose





― Hidenori Hiruta








2 件のコメント:

  1. Hidenori,
    __I'm very fond of the -mountain floating up-
    thought here, it certainly seems to be that it is... floating. A fine trio, the photo and both haiku.
    __When I see 'a field of parallel rows' such as this, the thought of 'corduroy' always comes to my mind.

    a crow perches
    on this abandoned plow
    corduroy field

    __This echo is intended to compliment your good haiku and photo. _m

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  2. Magyar San,
    nice to hear from you again.
    Thank you very much for your nice comment and your deep echo.
    This is my home village, where I was born and brought up when I was a boy.
    My home area has changed into another one, but the mountain seems to be almost the same.
    I can recognize those trees as they used to be. This is because I posted them here this time. Thank you again.

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